-In my writing, I tend to repeat information several times. On the recent paper that I did for my Communications class, I wrote the same information in two different paragraphs but it was rephrased. This causes the length of my essay to be shorter and it unable me to explain other points that would be worth writing about.
-Another error that I notice is that I am not very specific about a point that I state in my essay. Another example from my Communication essay was that I noticed that my professor wrote, "needs development/be more specific" twice. I often do not explain enough about the subject I am talking about. This causes confusion for my readers
-My last error that I often see on my writing is that I explain and say too much information without getting straight to the point. This error is combined with repeating information because I write the same thing over and over again and still I would be unable to get to the point. The sentences are just supporting the main idea of the paragraph but I would not state the main idea. This can also cause confusion and it can affect the audiences' lack of interest on the essay.
