Assignment 14

• For my final portfolio, I chose to revise my ad analysis essay. I chose to revise this because I thought that it would be easier to rewrite. The strengths of my ad analysis would be describing the image that I am trying to show my audience. However I lacked enough specifications and elaborating more on a subject that I mention. Another weakness that I tend to repeat every time is my thesis statement.
• To effectively revise my essay, I am going work on my thesis statement and elaborating more on my essay. Being specific is what I am not good at. Even if though that I was pretty clear and specific, it turns out to be the opposite of what I expect.